I love praise kink, so the beginning was extra good for me. Miles saying how he likes Phoenix and his voice... 💜
And their bickering afterwards! Maya here is right - they were made for each other :'D 💜 💜 💜
And Phoenix, omg... "I was trying to avoid it because I know it'd make it hard for me to eat frankfurts" ASFSDFAFASDFS :'DDDD
I love how he describes what he does to Miles' D, it's rare to read in doujins, they usually just show, I LOVE EVERY WORD
The guest doujin and the epilogue were GREAT too, they made me smile :'D 💜 💜 💜
As always, your edits are amazing. I love how you did the sounds! It seems so natural and good! The translation is great too, the translator did an amazing job.
It was amazing reading this and understanding what's going on, thank you so much for that!! 💜 💜 💜
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Date: 2019-03-18 03:04 pm (UTC)I love praise kink, so the beginning was extra good for me. Miles saying how he likes Phoenix and his voice... 💜
And their bickering afterwards! Maya here is right - they were made for each other :'D 💜 💜 💜
And Phoenix, omg... "I was trying to avoid it because I know it'd make it hard for me to eat frankfurts" ASFSDFAFASDFS :'DDDD
I love how he describes what he does to Miles' D, it's rare to read in doujins, they usually just show, I LOVE EVERY WORD
The guest doujin and the epilogue were GREAT too, they made me smile :'D 💜 💜 💜
As always, your edits are amazing. I love how you did the sounds! It seems so natural and good! The translation is great too, the translator did an amazing job.
It was amazing reading this and understanding what's going on, thank you so much for that!! 💜 💜 💜